English for Today by Ganiu Abisoye Bamgbose (Dr GAB)
COMMERCIALESE: AVOID EMPTY CLAUSES
~It should be noted that~ sessions will commence at 8 pm (lengthy).
Sessions will commence at 8 pm (concise).
~I wish to make clear that~ we are arriving tomorrow (lengthy).
We are arriving tomorrow (concise).
~It must be mentioned that~ Nigeria is a great country (lengthy).
Nigeria is a great country (concise).
GAB


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